Revelations in the Castle in the Air

by [pens&feathers]

Jacques awoke, and for a moment he could almost believe that he was back in the quaint little village. But as the last vestiges of his deep slumber finally fell away, he realized that he was still in the dark stone chamber in which he had fallen asleep.

In many ways, he wished this whole ordeal was just some horrible dream.

As he stirred, Gabrielle emerged from the shadows and stood by his bed. She looked shaken, nervous. On edge.

“What is it?” Jacques asked, looking into her agitated face.

“Oh, everything is wrong!” she whispered urgently, trying to hide the tears she felt pricking at the corners of her eyes. “Roland’s power is as strong as ever, but his greed and his ambition are not what I expected at all!”

Gabrielle paced back and forth across the chamber, her hair fanning out behind her like a vast, golden cape.

“I need to know what’s going on!” Jacques said severely.

“Well, your brother Roland-”

“My brother?”

Gabrielle gasped. “Oh dear. This is far worse than I feared.”

Comments

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  1. Revelations in the Castle in the Air

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Dun, dun dun! The plot twists keep getting more and more tangled. Great stuff, has me on the edge of my seat quite literally.
    LoA

  2. Revelations in the Castle in the Air

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 month ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love twists.
    Twisty twisty twisty twists.

  3. Revelations in the Castle in the Air

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 28 days ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    So I was right. She is trying to play Jacques against Roland. Maybe she’s trying to get him to usurp the throne that is rightfully Roland’s?

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