Too Forward

by Ana Cristina

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Jameson blinked, staring at Becca. He noticed that her lower lip curved in the most delicious way. He was tempted, almost, to bite it. He shook his head, as if to drive away that impulsive, impossible desire. Whoa, he thought to himself. What was in that beer!

To his immense consternation, Becca began to blush, tides of rosy red cresting over the peaks of her cheekbones. He wondered, for one insane second, if she could read minds.

“I’m being too forward, aren’t I. I’m so bad. I’m so bad! Sassy always warns me that I’m too forward with guys.”

As Jameson listened to Becca babble, his nerves slowly relaxed and he felt in control again. He tightened his grip on the beer bottle and took a deep drink, emptying it. Something caught his eye and he turned and saw Sassy dancing with Paul, her hips swaying to the beat. The music grew louder.

Becca tugged on his hand and whispered, “Just tell me one thing – am I too forward?”

He smiled as he pulled her onto the dance floor. “I wouldn’t want you any other way.”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Too Forward

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like how Becca despite being smokin’ hot is almost more nervous than he is. The babbling is great. You have sequel. Couldn’t resist a little dancefloor action. ;)

  2. Too Forward

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Lovely and very romantic moment, but in a realistic sort of way, how real life can go, not the silly taudry stuff in Harlequin romances and movies with Marc Ruffalo.

  3. Too Forward

    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 6 months ago

    Ok…I am officially Becca. LoA
    I would probably do the same exact thing in a situation like that.

  4. Too Forward

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 5 months ago

    hey nothing wrong with Marc Ruffalo.. hes smokin hot! But i agree the interaction was life like and realistic.

  5. Too Forward

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 4 months ago

    very realistic. :)

  6. Too Forward

    OrangeOreos' Buddy Icon OrangeOreos

    Posted 4 months ago

    Love her conflicting personality and looks.

    On to the dance-floor scene I go.

  7. Too Forward

    chakatreatmentson!(LoA)'s Buddy Icon chakatreatmentson!(LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    I’m pretty sure he would want her any way he could get her… but this is a great interaction,love the series

  8. Too Forward

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 2 months ago

    Love the babbling. Great series! Must move on to the sequel…

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