Picking The Petals Off A Rose

by snakepandafox<3

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Like picking the petals off a rose,
he picks off the few layers of my heart.
And he doesn’t know the damage that he’s doing to me.
He does it without thinking,
he stares at me with large, empty, dark eyes.
They grow soft when he sees me upset, and hard when he’s angry with me.
But every other time they are cold and lifeless.
He is cold and lifeless, if I live any longer in his icey heart, I will freeze.
He isn’t good for me and that just makes me want him more.
When he held me so close to his unhumanly still body,
I felt like I finaly fit and I never wanted to let go,
but I know that I have to let go,
but the thing is
I don’t want to let go.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    Mk's Buddy Icon Mk

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Beautiful, I love it!

  2. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!'s Buddy Icon I LOVE FRANK IERO AND WILLIAM BECKETT!!!

    Posted 4 months ago

    Oh, my God I love it so!

  3. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    nesdil's Buddy Icon nesdil

    Posted 4 months ago

    Wow. I completely know how you feel. This is amazing. Great job.
    love4evr

  4. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thats really good dude. whos it about?
    bff?
    micky?

    woah. ♥

  5. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    snakepandafox<3's Buddy Icon snakepandafox<3

    Posted 4 months ago

    yes it is about micky

  6. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    black dog 724's Buddy Icon black dog 724

    Posted 4 months ago

    bad grammar people unite, loved it, great job, i know how you feel, but its a girl, liked it a lot

  7. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    snakepandafox<3's Buddy Icon snakepandafox<3

    Posted 4 months ago

    yay bad grammer people!!! woo i got a B in grammer ahaha thank you for understanding

  8. Picking The Petals Off A Rose

    snakepandafox<3's Buddy Icon snakepandafox<3

    Posted 4 months ago

    oh nd btw paige i’d never write smthn lk that 2 best friend

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    Gerr Bear :]'s Buddy Icon Gerr Bear :]

    Posted 4 months ago

    awww… ahah. i wanna fit in someones arms. dannggggiiiittttt.
    or have i already?
    i hate my life
    lol

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