Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

by Ana Cristina

Sassy accosted Becca as soon as she opened the bathroom door, pushing her inside and closing the door firmly behind them. A guy’s voice could be heard in the background: “All right, two girls in the bathroom. Kink-y!”

Becca was too busy being frightened out of her wits by the manic look on Sassy’s face to pay much attention to the vulgar frat-boy outside.

Through gritted teeth Sassy hissed, “First you approach him with the questions, which was fine, if you don’t mind making a fool out of yourself, and then I decide to be a good friend and talk up his sleazy friend while you make cute with the ‘worm.’ But then you had to go and liven up the party with some Dirty Dancing! I thought that was our thing, Becca!”

“Jeez, Sassy, give it a rest!” Becca exclaimed. “Why do you care so much? We haven’t acted out that scene from Dirty Dancing since grade school. I didn’t think you’d mind.”

Sassy backed off, crossing her arms and tilting her chin up. “Becca, look. There’s something I have to tell you…”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 6 months ago

    what is she gunna say!! I need to know! Great series!!!

  2. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 6 months ago

    what is she gunna say!! I need to know! Great series!!!

  3. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

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    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    there,a a twist. I thought the grade school thing was genius and felt very real, like something a dramatic, maybe clingy friend would say.

  4. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

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    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I agree with THX that’s a great twist and it adds a touch of reality and some tension to the story. The livin’ was a little too easy for the lovebirds. Now, where will we go from here…

  5. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

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    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    No way.. what does she have to say.. i cant believe shes getting jealous!

  6. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

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    Posted 4 months ago

    jealous?!?!?!?!?!?!

  7. Two Girls in the Bathroom = Trouble

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    Posted 4 months ago

    It think jealous is rearing it’s ugly head!

    What will she say now?

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