Final Thoughts

by horrorfan13

Surprisingly, no scream escaped her lips. Instead, she thought of all those she was letting down. Her mother and father would not understand. She was also setting a bad example for her little sister, too.
I’m sorry!, her mind screamed.
How could I think this was worth it? But it must be. I hope something good happens despite this awful ending.
In those final falling moments, a smile spread across her face. Too bad her family would never know that she had made peace with herself and the world right before she hit the ground.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Final Thoughts

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Strangely haunting…I like it. Makes you really think about why someone would ever commit suicide. Kudos.

  2. Final Thoughts

    AeroPen's Buddy Icon AeroPen

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’ve always had the same feelings about committing suicide. It seems awfully selfish to let everyone down. But if your willing to go that far, life must be pretty bad anyways.

  3. Final Thoughts

    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    u like to make sequels to my stories, don’t u? lol its okay. i don’t mind. they’re good and i like them. so keep it up!

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