I Am (200something challenge)

by One Time, One Chance

I AM …

I am hiding.
I am crawling deeper.
I am almost there.
I am staying strong through weakness.

I am in desperate need of air.
I am in desperate need of care.

I am digging.
I am beginning to get cold.
I am hiding.
I am crawling deeper.
I am almost there.
I am staying strong through weakness.

I am in desperate need of air.
I am in desperate need of care.

I am thinking.
I am exploring my mind where unsearched.
I am digging.
I am sufficiently cold.
I am hiding.
I am crawling farther.
I am nearly done.
I am losing strength in my weakness.

I am in desperate need of air.
I am in desperate need of care.

I am weeping.
I am through with life.
I am done thinking.
I am done exploring.
I am done freezing.
I am done occulting.
I am done creeping.
I am done.
I am done.

I am in dire need of air.
I am in dire need of care.

I am dead.

Comments

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  1. I Am (200something challenge)

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 4 months ago

    =*( that was saaaaaad!

  2. I Am (200something challenge)

    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow.. that’s sad.. but really well written too.
    LoA

  3. I Am (200something challenge)

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 4 months ago

    Woahh, scary intense. Thanks for entering!

  4. I Am (200something challenge)

    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 4 months ago

    Woahh, scary intense. Thanks for entering!

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