My First Kiss

by Apostrophe

This is the street that we walked down. When we were lost. During the summer we went to France. Who would of thought that two kids from Brooklyn would end up in France?

Jason and I walked down this street at night. And it was so pretty. The lights from peoples homes were on. Along with the ones from the street. The evening air was so warm and fragrant. All the Parisan delights floating through the air.

Jason walked beside me, when we traveled this path the second time. We were on the way back to our cruise ship. And he looked into my eyes.. With that smouldering look. Like he was looking deep into my soul.

Things changed in that moment. He presented me with a ring, that he bought in one of the shops. He was so sneaky with it too. He was with me the whole time and I didn’t see.
With this gift, he asked me if I would go back to America as his girlfriend.

I gladly accepted. We stood at the corner in a long embrace that lead to one very passionate kiss. That just happened to be my first kiss.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. My First Kiss

    Phil Sporlan's Buddy Icon Phil Sporlan

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    what a wonderful story. I wish my first kiss was that great.

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    How romantic. Nicely written.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Cute, even if that’s probably an Italian street. Just messing with you, it was a very sweet little tale of young romance in the city of lights. I liked the line about the ‘Parisan delights floating through the air’.

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    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 4 months ago

    Aw, how sweet. Nice story.
    LoA

  5. My First Kiss

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 4 months ago

    thats so cute and romantic! nice story!

  6. My First Kiss

    crazee_writa's Buddy Icon crazee_writa

    Posted 4 months ago

    aww. that was so nice, sweet and romantic! love it!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    What a magical little romance! And that is one great pic.

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