My Double life...

by Mr Reeses

She sat across of me & for the first time in our relationship I was afraid. I was always a couple of steps ahead of her, but not tonight, not this moment. She sat infront of me with pain in her eyes, I had a feeling she finally figured out what I was hidin or what world I was not telling her about. She looked at me holding back her tears & all I could do is watch her. All my relationships end this way, because women can’t handle their man taking care of business, but I thought she was different, I thought she was going to remain my escape, my secret place, but right now, it seems thats all over now. She’s going to break up with me & thats going to break up my heart.

“Baby, whats wrong?” I mutter, even though I completely know why she’s upset. Because I live a secret life, In PA I ’m a good student but in NY- I’m a straight thug, that robs & cheats people.
She did the unexpected, she got up and kissed me, and whispered, “When your ready… I got you”
I was so confused, but I understood she had my back.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. My Double life...

    Phil Sporlan's Buddy Icon Phil Sporlan

    Posted 6 months ago

    A great start, I hope there is more to come.

  2. My Double life...

    Ms Kit Kat 's Buddy Icon Ms Kit Kat

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow i feel the pain that she feels i kno that is like to think u know someone and they turn out to be someone else

  3. My Double life...

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 6 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Intriguing set up for a story and a challenging double life, both for the reader to accept and apparently for a lot of girlfriends to accept as well.

  4. My Double life...

    Ms Pixy Stik's Buddy Icon Ms Pixy Stik

    Posted 6 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow that is a great start to a story. the ending was surprising yet refreshing to know she had his back.

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