Hide Your Energy Drinks[[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]

by Louise Madison

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I walk into the room, and am almost knocked over. My little brother was running around the room and acting like an overcaffinated chihuahua on speed. So it’s going to be another one of those days.
“Chip, I told you stay out of my energy drinks!!”
“Well then, well then, then, you should HIDE THEM BETTER !” he said, unaware of his voice rising in volume. I have. I’ve tried everything but he still finds them. He’s like a freaking german shepard even though he’s acting like a chihuahua.
“HeeheeheeheeheeheeHEEEEEE!!!” Chip giggled, his eyes getting very large.
“Hey, calm down!” I said, as he ran around the perimeter of the room, leaping over his bed with amazing agility.
“Chip STOP !” I yelled, catching him. Instead, he knocked me over and wrigled free of my clutches. He ran over to his bed and jumped so high the his knees were at his chest. Then he hit the ceiling and fell in a bellyflop fashion on to his plush bed. I sighed and walked to his bed. You think I’d learn.
He was fast asleep by now, in his crash.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Hide Your Energy Drinks[[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Hilarious visual, although I was a little worried when he hit the ceiling fan. We can see which character I related to. Yep, I was that kid.

  2. Hide Your Energy Drinks[[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That was awesome. I think I’ve been around that caffeinated kid before!

  3. Hide Your Energy Drinks[[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]

    Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3's Buddy Icon Bring Out Your Inner Emo Kid <3

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Haha. That was funny. I can even picture a particular kid in my school….

  4. Hide Your Energy Drinks[[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]

    Louise Madison's Buddy Icon Louise Madison

    Posted 4 months ago

    My inspiration was if my little brother ever found the Red Bull, NoFear and NOS energy drinks conviently stashed in a dresser drawer in my room. He’s just not good at finding them ; )

  5. Hide Your Energy Drinks[[Make Me Laugh Challenge]]

    Setadog's Buddy Icon Setadog

    Posted 4 months ago

    haha. That sounds like shoe whenever I give him a NOS .

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