Cold

by Maleghast

Cold

Really Cold

My eyes are so heavy; need to try.

Ow! Bright!

Slowly; try again. It’s so bright. I can see a lot of white, and it is so cold. Can I move? Touch your nose. Ok I can move that arm and I can see my hand. Try the other. Yeah that one’s ok too. My feet are cold. That’s good, I can feel my feet. Can I move them? Yes! Yes I can!

Sit up? Yes. Woah! Slowly; put a hand down behind you. Good. Now look around.

Snow. What’s that over there? Oh my God, that’s the plane! I remember. Harriet!

Got to get over there. There are no flames at least. Up on one knee. Feels steady. Up; careful! Just get used to it for a second. Now one foot in front of the other. Good.

It’s not that far. Only a few metres. Why is there a ringing in my ears? Must have made a lot of noise when we hit, I suppose. Oh look, my camera bag. Still intact. I guess the manufacturers were not exaggerating after all.

Nearly there. Is she here? Can’t see her; can’t see any blood either.

“Harriet!”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great first person, I’m-confused narration. Loved the randomness of noting the camera case and appreciating the truth in advertising.

  2. Cold

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 4 months ago

    Very good use of a raw, spontaneous thought-type thing. It’s like we’re in his head.

  3. Cold

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 4 months ago

    Prequeled.

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