It's Over, a sequel to Finish The Story!

by crazee_writa

To forget how she stayed out so late and made me worry, only to come home and tell me how stupid I was. To go out with all of those others guys when I thought she was faithful. I thought she could change, I really did. But some things are too good to be true.
This morning I packed my things and told her I was leaving. I could tell that the tears in her eyes were fake and her reaction was an act. She never really loved me. The vacation made things worse, but it made me sure. I looked back one last time at my old life and walked out the door into my new life.

I set off on my new adventure to forget all about her and to find someone else. It was never going to work in the first place.

I was trying to do the impossible.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. It's Over, a sequel to Finish The Story!

    howhardlifeis' Buddy Icon howhardlifeis

    Posted 5 months ago

    That’s it? you’re ending it at this. This has absolute series potential…why don’t you keep it going.

    -I like this. It’s a nice little plot and It’s so true and happens everyday to normal people.

  2. It's Over, a sequel to Finish The Story!

    crazee_writa's Buddy Icon crazee_writa

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thanks :) i will.

  3. It's Over, a sequel to Finish The Story!

    Vandom6's Buddy Icon Vandom6

    Posted 5 months ago

    I love it! I’m thinking we should write a prequel or two and maybe continue it.

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