Keen Sensation; Jealousy kills pt.2

by howhardlifeis♥

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“Alright dude, I’m out, I gotta get home.” He said, completely ignoring Amanda.
“Are you sure, ‘cause a bunch of us were about to go out and get some pizza, and then we’re heading down to the passage” Eric said, persuasively

“You guys are going to the passage? Tonight?” He said, with a look of suspicion on his face

The Passage is this place on the beach that has a reputation for being the “make-out” spot.

He can’t take Amanda down there. Not without me.

“Yeah you wanna come?” Amanda asked, uninterested in his answer.

“uhh no, I don’t think so. Maybe. I don’t know. Maybe”
Wow, I sound like a complete Idiot right now

“If I come, I’ll meet up with you guys at the passge, I’ll skip the pizza” He said, followed by a nod from both Amanda and Eric.

Later that day- The passage

“Wow, Can’t a girl find a spot to sit around here?” Amanda said, referring to the numerous teenagers hogging all the chairs that are set up

“There’s one right here” Eric said,referring to his lap.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Keen Sensation; Jealousy kills pt.2

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh my. Is Eric the boyfriend and he is cheating. Or is Eri cheating and he is the boyfriend. hmmm… the passage, sounds nasty.
    LoA

  2. Keen Sensation; Jealousy kills pt.2

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 4 months ago

    I’m slightly confused on who’s talking… but otherwise good.
    Hm… I am wondering about Amanda and Eric… must read sequel…

  3. Keen Sensation; Jealousy kills pt.2

    howhardlifeis♥'s Buddy Icon howhardlifeis♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    confused? yeah? sorry! But that’s why I tried to put who said what..

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