Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

by Blusparrow

Me: Let me through Kahn!
Kahn: Nope!

He laughs. Then I hear people searching in the plane.

Me: Help! Help! Hhh…

He covers my mouth to try to get me to stop, but it didn’t do anything. Someone came running.

Rescuer: I am coming for you.

He spots us and comes running. Kahn twists me to him and holds me back. Me in front and him in back.

Me: Hhh…

It was no use I was to muffled

Kahn: Shut up!

He reveals a Swiss army knife and points it to my neck.

Kahn: Remember when I said I got hurt? Ha-ha, you are too gullible. I did that you get closer to you and all I had to do was scream. You came to my rescue. You must of care about me and you still do don’t you.

He whisperers this all in my ear and I cringe.

Rescuer: I am going to have to a ask you to put the knife down or I will use force.
Kahn: No!

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    I couldn’t help myself Freedom.I had to make it intense. This reminds me of the first one. Hopefully someone wont die, unless it is Kahn, then that would be ok.
    LoA

  2. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wait just a quick question does she have a knife too or is that her neck…?
    Great sequel though, I luvv the intensity

  3. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome sequel!

  4. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Jesus Blu. We have got to get you some therapy for your violent ficlets. Hah. Just kidding. You know I love drama.

    But I have the same question as Nissakit…

  5. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    oh my bad. =)
    LoA

  6. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    howhardlifeis♥'s Buddy Icon howhardlifeis♥

    Posted 3 months ago

    haha I totally love the Drama, it makes every ficlet that much more interesting. =]
    And same question as the above..por favor.

  7. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    I fixed it. He has got the knife, it is all good!once again, my bad.
    LoA

  8. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Thanks, my turn to sequel. Maybe tonite.

  9. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I don’t understand why the rescuer would have a gun? I would have made that sentence: “You’ll have to put the knife down or I will use force.”
    And I think you meant to write “through” and not “threw” in the first line.
    LoA

  10. Someone Finds us, but it may be too Late

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    opps, that is typo. Sorry for the confusion guys!
    LoA

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