The Pillar - Into The Fold

by Browncoatben

Tom Relk had not moved from his place on The Pillar’s C.I.C. He simply sat there in silence, staring at the alien vessel still hanging outside.

Inside him, a conflict raged on. His humanity was intact, but buried beneath his graphite skin. He looked down at his chest, still not comprehending how he could breath in the vacuum.

What am I? he mused in his head.

You are in the Fold. came a tangible response. Not one of his own thoughts. That thing was talking to him.

Relk was not sure what to do. He walked to the rip in the wall and studied the alien vessel. It felt familiar.

It approached The Pillar in the way a train approaches a car stalled on the tracks. Coming to rest about one hundred meters away, a large hatch opened in the hull, washing The Pillar with a bright, aqua light.

Relk did the only thing his divided instincts found natural.

He walked out of the gap, pushed off of the hull, and floated into the monster’s gaping door.

Come home, Tom. the voice echoed in his mind.

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  1. The Pillar - Into The Fold

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The italics in the unlinked ficlet made things a little clearer. Keep going though.
    LoA

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love it. We’re worried about Relk but also scared of him and what he can/might do.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Did a sidequal. Thanks. Been struggling to get back into writing for a few days.

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very interesting… and just where is home?

  5. The Pillar - Into The Fold

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    @Ben – I am starting to get a bit of a “borg” feel in this piece… not that it is a bad thing. ;)
    Looking forward to the next installment.

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