The Really Evil Voice

by THX 0477

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The voice. The other voice. The silky voice with the delicate drawl. The really evil voice.

The slobbering beast was one thing, a being easily detestable in every way. But the other could reel you in, give you hope, and make you feel. And then, with brutal sophistication dangle you back to the beast, cursing yourself more than him for having fallen once again for the lies.

Crouching atop the entrance to Gordo’s pit of despair, Cole smiled as he listened. The girls had gone silent, like good little girls. They had learned, and he felt good about that. There was a reason he went into teaching, the joy of molding young minds. He knew what he did to them, how he tortured their souls while Gordo amused himself with their bodies.

And he knew, as well and fully as he knew the standard works of Shakespeare, that they deserved it.

Satisfied and content, Cole stood and moved toward the kitchen. He shuddered, a momentary lapse in his reserved calm, when a heavy-handed knock came upon his door.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Really Evil Voice

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    So I was right about Cole. The psychological type of monster. I like the heavy-handed knock. Wonder who it is.

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    kaellinn18's Buddy Icon kaellinn18

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Good stuff. The only problem I had was with the word “destable”. Did you mean destable, as in unstable? Or was “detestable” the word you were going for?

  3. The Really Evil Voice

    JMSquire's Buddy Icon JMSquire

    Posted 3 months ago

    They make a pretty disturbing couple of characters, I gotta admit. I am also wondering who is at the door.

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    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    @JMSquire, someone/something with extraordinarily large hands I think. Tony Robbins maybe?

  5. The Really Evil Voice

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    Thanks kaelinn18; I had meant it to be detestable. And thanks for the positive comments, guys. And those who’ve read the whole series probably have a fair guess who could be at the door.

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    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Excellent job. I can feel the tention that must’ve been in there when all of the girls went silent. Once more the descriptiveness is captivating. Excellent work.

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    intense story. I wonder if cole and gordo are the same person.. very intriguing

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 3 months ago

    intense story. I wonder if cole and gordo are the same person.. very intriguing

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    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The series must go on, THX !

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