Waiting For You

by Writer4Life00nj

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I’m still looking day and night. All the time, for you. Looking for that special someone who’s perfect for me. I know your out there. Hey, you may be reading this. Hey, you might be miles and miles away. But, no matter what I know I’ll find you. Everyone has their time. Their turn. Hey, mine might be seconds away. Hey, mine might be years away. But, I know I’ll have my chance. I may lose you. Then find you again. I might never meet you for years and years to come. But I’ll find you some how, someday, somewhere. What ever it takes, I’ll find you. Waiting for you is an adventure. Keeping my eyes out every minute of the day. Waiting for you is painful. Seeing everyone around me taking their chance. Waiting for you is hopeless. Will I ever find you? Waiting for you is hopeful. I know I’ll find you. Waiting for you is what life’s about. Waiting for you is what I’ll do. That’s what I’ll do until I find you.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Waiting For You

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 4 months ago

    This is written a little awkwardly. I don’t like the repitition of “Hey” so many times, and I think it would look better in stanzas. The repetition might look a little more poetic, which I think is what you were going for. I do like the idea, though, and I can relate.
    LoA

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 4 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    ooo I like this one too but I agree it might look better in stanzas. Great job though

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