Seconds

by SKermitgorf

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When I was finished devouring her, I went back to the club.. for seconds.

I spotted a pretty young girl sitting alone.
“May I buy you a drink?,” I asked in my savviest manly voice.
I had shaken off the beast in me on the walk back to the club.
“Of course, handsome,” she replied.
We sat and chatted while she slowly sipped her Mojito.
I drank my beer and listened to her prattle.
She had another, a Cosmo this time. I had another beer,
I offered to walk her to her car. When we were next to her BMW , I asked, “It’s such a beautiful night, would I be too forward to ask you if you would like to stroll in the park with me and look up at the stars?” I knew that would get her, talk of romance always did the trick. So few men knew how to talk the way a woman needs them too.

“That’s a lovely idea,” she said with a twinkle in her green eyes.
Looking up at the stars I asked, “May I kiss you?”
“You’re such a gentleman, where have you been all my life?,” she giggled.
“You think I am a gentleman?”, I laughed.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Chilling, pretty scary. Also romantic, I wish there were more gentlemen in the world. Sigh.. Good sequel.
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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You changed you name! =O
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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    That last line, oh boy. Great sequel, Skeet. If that is your real name.

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    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very intriguing character. So romantic yet so dangerous. I can’t wait to see where this series goes.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Nice job laying on the thickness of the charm and romance in the face of impending doom.

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i like the subtle hints at his charisma, he seems rather charismatic, even in his mysterious ways.. He asks if she thinks hes a gentleman.. as if he doesn’t believe her. thats odd

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    Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)'s Buddy Icon Capital "W" Writer (LoA's Geekus Awesomeus)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great sequel! I agree, this could really develop into something. :-D
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