When You Drive 100mph

by Holdini

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I drove the car down the road well above the speed limit. The sound of sirens behind me no longer bugged me. I took another sip of my beer and kept going. Then a deer leapt in front of me and stood there, looking at my spot lights. I slammed down the brakes and turned to the right. I heard the deer crying out.

And then the cop car smashed into my fender. That fender cost me $600. I hit the pedal and took off in the forest and took another sip of my beer. I looked behind me to see I had lost the cops. Big mistake. As soon as I looked behind me I rammed into a tree. A branch cracked and fell on top of my car. The front of my car rose up and crushed my chest killing me instantly.

Man I hate dying.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. When You Drive 100mph

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 3 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Ack. So do I. Love the last line. Dying sucks, no doubt. Lovely life(nah, death.) story of a drunk driver.

  2. When You Drive 100mph

    Writer4Life00nj's Buddy Icon Writer4Life00nj

    Posted 3 months ago

    This is good. The last line says it all.

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