Moments of Happiness

by OrangeOreos

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“Daddy! Look at me! Look!”

He laughed as his daughter took her first wobbly steps on the ice.

“That’s wonderful!” he said, “Now watch my feet.”

He started to skate slowly across, one foot, then the other, and motioned for his daughter to follow.

She slowly pushed one foot ahead, still unsteady, but with a look of such intense concentration on her face that it looked like she was about to burst.

“Like this, daddy?” she asked, cautiously lifting her other foot.

“Yes!” he laughed, as his daughter slowly moved forward, and then started to pick up speed.

“I’m doing it, daddy! I’m doing it! Look!” she screamed.

Her father chuckled, and started to skate alongside his daughter.

“Your doing great! That’s my girl!”

And together, side by side, father and daughter skated away.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Moments of Happiness

    Disturbed Youth's Buddy Icon Disturbed Youth

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Aw how cute! i definately didnt expect this out of you! lol

    LoA

  2. Moments of Happiness

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 4 months ago

    awweee! tht’s adorable. nice interactions between the two characters. the dialouge is very real-sounding, for lack of a more suiting word.
    =]

  3. Moments of Happiness

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 4 months ago

    awwwww. wow, this is sweet and a little bit strange coming from you. :)
    (i meant that in the most best way possible.)
    LoA

  4. Moments of Happiness

    paper flowers' Buddy Icon paper flowers

    Posted 4 months ago

    awesome like always…very cute story. me like :)
    LoA

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