I remember him

by Oakvillecat

We were only having fun.
I remember that night as clearly as I remember yesterday.
He had held me in his arms and I had felt safe.
We had sat and talked for almost an hour into the night.
The moon was high and so were my spirits. My spirits were always high when I was with him. We had held each other tight in the cold and sat in the silence and watched our breath mix in the air and soar into the sky.
I remember his ringtone. It was his favorite song, happy yet almost saddening at the same time. I remember his calm face when his mom said come home now and his warm hand when he led me to his car.

I remember his laughter and jokes on the way home. The radio blasting out tunes. I remember him looking at me with a face that said ~love.

I remember the lights of the truck. The pain of the impact of the dashboard to my body.

I remember the ambulance taking him away from me, my tears flowing freely, when I waved goodbye.

But most of all, I remember him.

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  1. I remember him

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg this story is amazing. I love how you capture the readers attention and you get them sucked into your story. It may be short but it packs a punch especially at the end. I was not expecting that. Wow.. you really illustrated these emotions beautifully.

  2. I remember him

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    omg, thats soooo good!!! I love how you ended it! that was amazing!!!!=]=]=]=]

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