Bagman: Not My Style

by JLaughter

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Bagman: Not My Style

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the use of the storefront as a device for introducing the appearance of your character.

  2. Bagman: Not My Style

    Browncoatben's Buddy Icon Browncoatben

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I really liked the subtle humor here. We’re starting to really understand Benny’s personality. He’s hardcore, but care-free. Like a Rambo Carebear. Enjoying the read.

  3. Bagman: Not My Style

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 4 months ago

    Rambo Carebear? Hmm…the story possibilities that come from those two words are boundless

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