Life Doesn't Work That Way

by Mask By The Moon

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“C’mon, Mena,” Colin whined, “spar with me!”

“Colin, stop. I’m not a fighter,” she replied, her voice laid back… for now.

“You used to be!” He’d chosen a bad time to pop out of nowhere and bug her to spar. She spun on her heel and walked away at the pace that shows one is angry.

“You know, things change!” she yelled. He followed her and put a hand on her shoulder, only to have her push it off quite harshly.

“Mena, what happened to you? You’re a completely different girl.”

“Yeah. I am. My parents, siblings… my whole family is dead! That changes a person!”

“Oh, Mena….” he said quietly. “I’m so sorry… I—I didn’t know…”

“No. You didn’t. You never bother to check on me. You just disappear for four years and don’t check on me, and then you show back up expecting to everything to just be fine? No, Colin. Life doesn’t work that way!”

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Life Doesn't Work That Way

    Freedom's Buddy Icon Freedom

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Woah. That’s extreme. Good start for a possible series though. Love the last line.

  2. Life Doesn't Work That Way

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    great last line.. and Title>this is one of your deepest and best ficlets ever i hope the new manager of ficlets features it.
    emotionally packed.

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