An Upcoming Test

by Blusparrow

I ran to Sam only to find her on a stretcher and conscious.

Sam: What is going on!! I don’t want to go through this alone!!

I sighed and I had to make another decision. Sam needs me but so does Demi. Sam is safe Demi is not. Ok, decision is made.

Mike: You are safe; these guys are good they will protect you. I to go, but I promise I will be here before we leave.

With that I run away. I hear a scream, but it wasn’t a girl. It sounded like a guy. I run faster to see what is up. Please let everyone be ok.

Mike didn’t want to see anymore death, as you know he is a very emotional person. What happens next will test everyone. Demi’s trust and Mike’s bravery. Mix that all together with Kahn trying to kill Demi and a massive storm coming and we have one heck of a climax.

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 4 months ago

    I am sorry I didn’t sequel yesterday! I am was so busy! I am so so sorry!
    LoA

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i like the brief summary in bold. It’s definaltey something diffrent. It gives the story a unique edge.

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    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the summary too. I think I have an idea and don’t worry about not sequeling. I was in a bad mood when I sent you that message, so no worries. Great sequel.

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    Freedom :]'s Buddy Icon Freedom :]

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh Jeez, you’re tempting me with the “death” idea, but I’m trying to steer clear of that. Hmm…

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    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Gret sequel. I think you wanted to italicize the sentences “Sam needs me but so does Demi. Sam is safe Demi is not. Ok, decision is made.” but you forgot the _ (underscore) at the end.

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