Not ready yet.

by grazulis

The flesh flickers and grows in an explosion of silent stop motion, muscles flexing and combining while reaching out like tentacles. His face slackens and grows pale, as though he is in a trance, a coma death mask as his body tears through energy reserves to rebuild itself into a new form.

Comments

  1. Not ready yet.

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Gruesome and very descriptive little bit of sci-fi fun. Why not make it longer?

  2. Not ready yet.

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    Yeah, this totally feels like a tiny crumb off of a small piece of some interesting pie.

  3. Not ready yet.

    Six Feet Under The Stars' Buddy Icon Six Feet Under The Stars

    Posted 4 months ago

    whoa. too short. I want to know more. But its really cool, especially the description

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