Resistance

by Ana Cristina

Jameson was the first to wake up. First he became aware of the painful crick in his neck, wincing even before he opened his eyes. Then he became aware of a numb sensation in his right arm, which he couldn’t lift for some reason. It felt strangely heavy. He tried lifting it again and met even more resistance this time. Then he heard a loud thump.

“Ouch!”

Jameson’s eyes flew open and he stared in amazement at the girl splayed at his feet, her nightie revealing scintillating glimpses of her body beneath the gossamer-thin fabric. Her eyes were glazed over and red with mascara smudges underneath her eyes, making her look vaguely raccoon-like. Jameson thought he’d never seen anything more adorable in his life.

“Becca, why are you on the floor?”

“Because you threw me onto it, dummy. Come and help me,” she grumbled.

Jameson reached down to pull her up and lifted her neatly into his arms, as though she were a doll.

“Hey, put me down!”

His eyes were strangely tender. Suddenly Becca no longer felt in control.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. Wow. Wow. So funny and yet so endearing at the same time. I like the detail that she no longer feels like she’s in control. Tremendous sequel!

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. Wow. Wow. So funny and yet so endearing at the same time. I like the detail that she no longer feels like she’s in control. Tremendous sequel!

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I hate it when comments get duplicated like that. Oh well, consider me twice as impressed by your awesomeness. You have sequel!

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    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 4 months ago

    TBS , l couldn’t have said it better myself.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I loved the whole half-awake start and lifting his arm against the mysterious resistance. Fun stuff.

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    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    great visual descriptions! I loved it.

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    man what an awkward situation. Such a fitting morning after that crazy evening. It’s rather humerous thier interactions. This series is very entertaining.

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