Romantic Type

by Labsettings

“He dunno what ‘e should do she’s seventeen ‘e’s twenty-two is that too much of a difference?”

The pidgeon detectives had the scenario very nearly spot on. Jenna inhaled the scents of her tea as she thought back on the past events. He seemed like a nice fellow, gentlemanly, at first. They met at work, Marc worked next door and he popped in occasionally to talk to one of her colleagues. He’d flash a smile at her and she’d busy herself with another useless task.

There was a certain charm about Marc, but a sense of… unease… felt by Jenna when she in close in contact with him.

She had recently split up from a very short-lived relationship and just wanted a good night out. Just a movie, or maybe bowling. She hadn’t been bowling in a while.

However, that unease was never settled, so Jenna thought better of a night out with Marc. One night however, Marc was simply unavoidable.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Romantic Type

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice way of introducing the ages of the characters. Little typo there “occaisionally” should be “occasionally” – without the extra i.

  2. Romantic Type

    Labsettings' Buddy Icon Labsettings

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks, Pyro!

  3. Romantic Type

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 3 months ago

    okay what is going on?? I am intrigued. I’d like to know more about Marc and Jenna, and also where the detectives come in…
    sequel?
    LoA

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