HIS Pain a Song Forever

by KevMullins

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. HIS Pain a Song Forever

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is an interesting, darker, parallel to Reaper. I like it so far.
    “Its purred in words like silk,” doesn’t quite read properly though.

  2. HIS Pain a Song Forever

    kaellinn18's Buddy Icon kaellinn18

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Freaky, but gripping. I think your use of imagery has improved.

  3. HIS Pain a Song Forever

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks kaellinn! The next piece is gonna be rough on people.

  4. HIS Pain a Song Forever

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very dark

  5. HIS Pain a Song Forever

    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Minor correction (I think), should diner be dinner?

    Good series, seems like ages since i read anything dark on this site.

  6. HIS Pain a Song Forever

    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very cool second installment.

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