Wonderball Comes to Life

by Eckhouse

Emily’s stomach turned in a mix of relief and dread. Wonderball was not entirely certain she would die this year.

“Wait, so – a coma? Will I end up in a coma this year?”

Wonderball sat in her lap, its shimmering surface beginning to swirl. For what seemed an eternity, Emily sat and waited on its response. How was this thing, supposedly able to answer only in numbers, giving her this information?

The answer cube finally clicked against the glass window – Yes.

“Oh god!” Emily gasped. “How do I end up in a coma? What kind of sick toy are you? How could you possibly know all these things?” Emily dropped Wonderball for the second time that day, burying her head in her pillow.

From across the room, she heard a click. Warily, she slid off the bed and picked up Wonderball, checking its response – Ask Again.

Emily almost laughed at the absurdity. “What in the world,” she started, voice trembling, “could possibly put me in a coma this year?”

The cube, almost immediately, returned its answer – 34.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Wonderball Comes to Life

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I loved, absolutely loved the line about what kind of sick toy are you. And a great ending there, answering a ‘what’ question with a number.

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hmm… I wonder what significance the number 34 has…

  3. Wonderball Comes to Life

    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted 4 months ago

    Yeah what can 34 mean?! Great job continuing the story. What an awesome story, to think it came out of a challenge.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooh, the mystery deepens. I like how the answer cube goes back to numbers. Mind if I sequel again?

  5. Wonderball Comes to Life

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice job of keeping the wonderball completely unpredictable, mysterious and magical.

  6. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 4 months ago

    Ana Cristina: Please, sequel away!

  7. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 4 months ago

    34? Hm. Can’t wait for the sequel!
    LoA

  8. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Bartimaeus' Buddy Icon Bartimaeus

    Posted 4 months ago

    Wow, this is indeed suspenseful

  9. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You got sequel!

  10. Wonderball Comes to Life

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    what?? 34 what? hours, days? AH
    LoA

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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ha – this reminded me of when the characters from Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy ask what the answer to the question of Life, the Universe, and Everything is. I keep getting laughs out of this series when I shouldn’t be. =)

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    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    34…? What? that is one messed up toy!

  13. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Music-Hearted's Buddy Icon Music-Hearted

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Haha, I’m with Stovohobo on this… it reminds me of Hitchhiker’s Guide in that way. Nice sequel!
    LoA

  14. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 4 months ago

    34!? And I also agree with MusicHearted and Stovohobo. =]
    LoA

  15. Wonderball Comes to Life

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 4 months ago

    this definitely reminds me of hitchhiker’s. haha. but anyway, creepy stuff!
    “What is the answer to life, the universe, and everything?”
    “42.”

  16. Wonderball Comes to Life

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    OMG . scary. 34? wtf???

  17. Wonderball Comes to Life

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    34… hmm.
    thats freaky

  18. Wonderball Comes to Life

    Twitch's Buddy Icon Twitch

    Posted 3 months ago

    wow… I really want to see where this leads…

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