Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

by KevMullins

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Gotta go. Krystle’s coming. Alex glanced back over his shoulder to see what Jessica was looking at. Apparently Krystle wasn’t the easily blown off type.

From the look on her face and the way she was stomping down the mall, she was mad and looking to kick some ass. Specifically Jessica’s. Hell hath no fury… Gotta do something fast, Alex thought, before we get an ‘Alexis vs Krystle catfight in the fountain’ re-enactment.

“This way quick!” He grabbed Amanda and Jessica by the wrists, leading them back behind the fountain, Becky trailing after like a lost puppy. “Good, I don’t think she saw us. A booth at Casa Grande, it’s probably about the only semi-private place here.”

“Excellent,” Jessica said, taking the lead, “this way!”

This was more than Becky could take. “No! I’m never going back to that horrible place again. You can’t make me!” The waterworks in full effect now.

“Now Becks,” Amanda said, trying to calm the hysterics. Jessica rolled her eyes, “Oh brother!”

“This happens a lot?” Alex asked.

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  1. Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cute: “The waterworks in full effect now.”

  2. Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I love it!

  3. Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks Jen. I reused parts of my 12 and grafted them into your storyline. ficlet recycling :)

  4. Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is completely different from your other series, and you’re doing a very good job changing the style.

  5. Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks John. This series was more about having fun Jen’s parts really got the story going

  6. Alex in Wonderland - Part 14

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is so interesting to read – I can imagine you and Jen sitting in front of your respective computers and rushing to write and be the first to publish each forthcoming sequel! Keep up the good work. It’s Great!

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    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    @Judee – Thanks, actually me an Jen are in cahoots now so this could get interesting. ;)

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    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 4 months ago

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    Ha, well, cahoot and keep ‘em coming!

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    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love the idea of Ficlet recycling… I may pull more from your 12 just to add a little something ;).

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