Nice exchange. Really paints a picture of how big Lefleur really is. Although, who waits 97 seconds for someone to answer the door?
You used “would no how” in the first paragraph when you meant “would know how.”

This does a great job emphasizing how large Agent Lefleur is. I like the way this story is coming together.

I wonder if the ending bodes well for Agent Lefleur.

You did a great job of showing just how big Agent Lefleur really is. I’m wondering who it is that’s pulling into the drive way though and what’s going to happen next.

By God this series is good. No, beyond good. Heck, it’s beyond my vocabulary-good. It’s suspenseful, it’s captivating… ah, who am I kidding? These words don’t do this rockin’ awesome series justice. I’m on-the-edge-of-my-seat, biting-my-nails, pulling-my-hair EXITED FOR MORE !!! (I’d give it more stars, but I can’t do that.)