HIS Prayers Will Go Unanswered

by KevMullins

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. HIS Prayers Will Go Unanswered

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Good follow up. Very nice first line.
    You used “died” in the last line. Should be “die.” Also, I’d switch to “still lying in the corner.”

  2. HIS Prayers Will Go Unanswered

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 4 months ago

    Cool stuff, man. Horror’s not my thing, but I’m enjoying the series you have going. You’re really showing a lot of versatility on here, between the Mobius Strip, the 80’s string and this one. Keep going!

  3. HIS Prayers Will Go Unanswered

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 4 months ago

    Thanks Jon… Ficlets are like candy coated, crack cocaine sprinkled, hot buttered popcorn with ice cold beer, LOL !
    Seriously, this writing stuff in new to me (aside from boring technical writing for work) and I’m on a writer’s high.
    The horror stuff is different for me too. I more like the hard Sci-fi pieces. Just trying to play with a few styles and push my comfort level.

  4. HIS Prayers Will Go Unanswered

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this horror story.

  5. HIS Prayers Will Go Unanswered

    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    A very nice post-mortem for the death scene in the previous one.

    I like the guilt in the shower, I found it very believable.

    Another good entry, I look forward to the next instalment

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