Room 34

by Eckhouse

As the bus reached the hospital, Emily heard clicking from Wonderball in the backpack resting next to her. She pulled open the zipper -

Trust… me.

Emily signed in at the nurse’s desk and proceeded down the hall. Room 32, room 33 – and there it was. Her stomach did one last back flip before she nervously poked her head in the door.

Dana was lying on the bed heavily wrapped in bandages, while her mother sniffled in a chair next to her. Upon seeing Emily, Mrs. Poole jumped up and hugged her tightly.

“Mrs. Poole, I’m so sorry! What happened?”

Mrs. Poole was pale, and shaking. “It was such a freak accident. Dana bought one of those new fortune-telling bowling ball things, and she tried to open it up to see what was inside. The liquid was pressurized, or… oh, god. I don’t know what’s in those things, Emily, but my baby has burns on sixty percent of her body!”

As her voice trailed off, Emily felt the blood drain from her face. From inside her backpack, she both heard and felt a lot of clicking.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

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    uselessness' Buddy Icon uselessness

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh, that’s just sinister.
    LoA

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 4 months ago

    Wow. Dang, I don’t know what to say.
    LoA

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Did not see that coming. But I suppose that would make it ‘not an accident’, perhaps.

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    i live NYLSC's Buddy Icon i live NYLSC

    Posted 4 months ago

    does she read it?

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    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 4 months ago

    One word: freaky

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ew.. omg.. that like.. SUCKS .
    LoA

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    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Uselessness’s comment just summed up my whole feeling for this series. Perfect.

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    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 4 months ago

    Like Dr. Mousse, I have no idea what to say to that! It was amazing!

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Interesting development. Agreeing with the sinister description.

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    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 4 months ago

    wow… DIE VETCH DIE !!! (SORRY!!!! I just have the word Vetch in my system…)

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 3 months ago

    I lied in my last comment. I don’t want a cool thing that can tell the future.
    LoA

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 3 months ago

    completely agree with uselessness.
    LoA

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    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 3 months ago

    OMG . I don’t want a wonderball anymore. crappp. scary. oh snap. intense. can’t breathe. im freaked.

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    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh. My. God.
    crap she’s in trouble
    evil wonderballs!!!

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    Accident Prone Kris' Buddy Icon Accident Prone Kris

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow… that was awesome!

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