Landing Downwind

by YodaOnCrack

A popular country tune blasted through the plane’s new stereo system.

“Susan, be quiet,” Kate said. “Let him do this.”

“O.K., Greenlee, line her up,” Steve said to himself. “There we go. Come on, baby – slow down. Come on, don’t overshoot. O.K., gear down,” he said. He flipped a switch and they heard the sound of the landing gear locking into place, three indicator lights shining bright green.

Inside Cactus Charlie’s bar, a growing group of people were gathering around the bar window. Several looked up and pointed at the Cheyenne making a wobbly final approach to runway 32.

“They’re landing downwind,” Todd said. “Hey everyone, look, Trax has finally lost it! He’s gonna land Greenlee’s Cheyenne downwind. Anyone got a camcorder?”

Inside the Cheyenne, Steve Greenlee engaged the flaps and applied back pressure to the flight controls. The runway lights flashed by as he tried his best to level the wings of the plane. The rear wheels touched down hard and the plane hopped along the runway at dangerous speeds.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Landing Downwind

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice job with the split perspective with the people in the bar to give us a hint at their impending doom due to the error of inexperience without having to chime in as the omniscient narrator.

  2. Landing Downwind

    Blusparrow's Buddy Icon Blusparrow

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hmm…. Ya, almost foreshadowing doom.
    Reading on.
    LoA

  3. Landing Downwind

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This spells trouble. I love the onlookers take on the situation and how his inexperience almost demands disaster.

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