My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]

by Ana Cristina

The first time I fell in love, it wasn’t pretty. It wasn’t the stuff of movies, with violins thrumming in the background and two doves cuddling on a branch somewhere.

When I say I fell in love, I really do mean I fell. As in on the ground, right in front of his house, with him outside with his friends watching and laughing. Oh, and pointing. (As if the laughter wasn’t cruel and adolescent enough.)

I was 11 and skating around the block going a hundred miles an hour, despite the fact that I have a reputation for being a klutz (I’m the only person I know who wakes up with bruises). I certainly wasn’t looking to fall in love.

I’d never had a boyfriend before and I still played with Barbies. I dreamed of being an astronaut (this was before I realized I’d have to be good at math in order to be an astronaut, math being my least favorite subject). Boys were just … there.

But then he appeared, like a brilliant comet streaking across my sky. He had acne and braces. But a kind smile. That day changed my life.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 4 months ago

    Embarrassing, but true story.

  2. My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 4 months ago

    Ah, that was sweet. I like the added detail of the childhood astronaut fantasy.

  3. My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this was so sweet and cute! I love the part “He had acne and braces.” It just really made it real for me, loved it!

  4. My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Well done ficlet. Gets the emotion and surprise of a first crush across perfectly.

  5. My First Real Fall [Phosphate 11's First Challenge]

    XxjerseyxgirlxX's Buddy Icon XxjerseyxgirlxX

    Posted 2 months ago

    I wake up with bruises, and I have no clue how they got there.

    Anyway, I like this a lot. Really nice story.

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