Dying to Live 3

by Showmeyourwits

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Dying to Live 3

    gemminx's Buddy Icon gemminx

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Haunting and, I imagine, quite realistic. Junkie Philosophy 101. Great job conveying the hopelessness and self-loathing. Refreshingly good mechanics that need only minor tweaking.

  2. Dying to Live 3

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    mechanics schemantics i like it i wish i had four arms cause i would give it four thumbs up, plus i could really juggle good but that is besides the point good work/

  3. Dying to Live 3

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    mechanics schemantics i like it i wish i had four arms cause i would give it four thumbs up, plus i could really juggle good but that is besides the point good work/

  4. Dying to Live 3

    Showmeyourwits' Buddy Icon Showmeyourwits

    Posted 5 months ago

    minor tweaking is too kind….maybe three or four rewrites followed by a trip to a souless blackhearted editor who sharpens blue pencils with the teeth of community college creative writng students

  5. Dying to Live 3

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ha. Well, as much as I’m a stickler for editing myself, I don’t think it matters as much on ficlets. Sure, it would make it more accessible and look nice. Anyway, this gets all the five stars I gave every other one.

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    gemminx's Buddy Icon gemminx

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Anything worth doing is worth doing well – ficlets, or not. Also, please tuck yourself back in, showmeyourwits; “dey’z hanging out”!

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