Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

by KevMullins

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“Cheshire Cat to Caterpillar, come in Caterpillar.”

No response. “This is Cheshire Cat to Caterpillar, come in Caterpillar!” Still no response.

Cheshire Cat zoomed the feed from the break room to fill his main monitor. The Caterpillar was having what appeared to be a heated conversation with the four travelers. He clicked the talk button three times in quick succession.

“Cheshire Cat to Cater… ah hell Jack, cut the psychobabble and hit em with the sleeping gas already!” Nothing.

“This is Cheshire Cat to White Rabbit, come in White Rabbit.”

“Go Cheshire.”

“Jack’s up to his antics again.”

“Understood, I’m on it Cheshire.”

Cheshire Cat looked back at the main monitor just in time to see one of the female travelers take out the Caterpillar with a Judo move.

“Oh Shit, Caterpillar down!” Cheshire Cat shouted on all channels, “We have a major situation. The lead female just went Karate Kid on the Caterpillar.”

“This is White Rabbit to all operatives… move in now!”

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  1. Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

    KevMullins' Buddy Icon KevMullins

    Posted 3 months ago

    (Kevin chops hole in webpage, sticking face to hole) I’m Baaaack! (in best Jack Nicholson voice.)

    I guess Jessica wasn’t happy with the Caterpillar’s responses. :)

    Your turn Jen.

  2. Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

    JLaughter's Buddy Icon JLaughter

    Posted 3 months ago

    “Lead female went karate kid”...that just made me chuckle. Keep it comin’!

  3. Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I laughed out.. (and almost woke a snoring husband). LOVE the addition!!

    Now I have some serious thinking to do. My gears are already turning at an alarming rate. ;D

  4. Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Another thing that I have to add before going to notepad to play with this one, I am going to duct tape my fingers to keep from adding the vision of Chris Rock standing over Caterpillar and screaming “You got knocked the Frak out!” when the reinforcements arrive. >:D

  5. Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Karate Kid rocks!

  6. Alex in Wonderland - Part 27

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m in agreement with the others here, that was a great line. Totally rad!

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