So Long...

by g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

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As Emily tried to understand what had just happend, her consciousness began to flicker, a dying lightbulb in an attic.

She felt woozy; she fought to remain conscious. “Who are you?” she mustered.

“You’ll learn soon enough,” the man droned, raising his arm parallel to the floor, arm extened toward Emily’s chest. Emily felt something twist her heart; she fought not to cry out. Her eyes met Dana’s.

“Help… me…” she gasped. Dana’s eyes were filled with a combination of sympathy, inability to help, and a slight “I told you so.”

The man’s mouth twisted into a dark smile. “It’s almost complete,” he hissed to himself.

“What’s…. complete?” Emily mustered, now on her knees in agony.

“I’ve been waiting so long…” the man said in diabolical victory, just as Emily blacked out, “so… long…“

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. So Long...

    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 3 months ago

    creepy music plays Noooooo! I knew nothing good could happen.

    Good job continuing the ficlet series of the wonderball. Everyone that’s working together on this is doing an amazing job.

  2. So Long...

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 3 months ago

    :-D Thanks; I’m not usually a thriller person, but apparently I did good… Good job to everyone else who’s been working on this story!

  3. So Long...

    Fantasy's Buddy Icon Fantasy

    Posted 3 months ago

    amazing!!

  4. So Long...

    Nissakit's Buddy Icon Nissakit

    Posted 3 months ago

    omg, does he want her heart to live of something??? great job!

  5. So Long...

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 3 months ago

    I’m not sure what “the man” wants… I’m leaving that to someone else down the road ;-)

  6. So Long...

    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow. This is awesomely creepy. Good job.
    LoA

  7. So Long...

    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 3 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ok, so any questions I had about Wonderball’s intent have been answered. Thanks, guys. : )

  8. So Long...

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 3 months ago

    Wow, that’s a freaky ending. What’s he been waiting for?

  9. So Long...

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 3 months ago

    Oooh, maybe she’s being transferred into the Wonderball? Or maybe I’m totally delusional – either way, good ficlet.

  10. So Long...

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Definitely creepy take into an entirely different direction. I like how everyone is continuing the back and forth between the two girls despite one being unable to speak.

  11. So Long...

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 2 months ago

    Whats complete!??!

  12. So Long...

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    what happened to the wonderball…?

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    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 2 months ago

    WHATS ALMOST COMPLETE ?!!?!!!
    WHO IS THIS GUY ? IS HE THE WONDERBALL ???
    HOLY FRICKING CRAP !!!!!!
    SOOOO INTENSE !!!
    SOOOO SCARY !!!!!!!!!

  14. So Long...

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Hey, you wanna know what happens next… ya gotta keep reading ;-)

  15. So Long...

    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oh wow.
    just…
    wow.

  16. So Long...

    g2 (la pianista irlandesa)'s Buddy Icon g2 (la pianista irlandesa)

    Posted 2 months ago

    Geez, I feel wicked important, what with everyone saying how awesome this thing is! :-D Thanks everyone; glad I could help move this puppy along. (and I never thought I could write creepy, but apparently I did well with it…)

  17. So Long...

    Colorguardx0o's Buddy Icon Colorguardx0o

    Posted 2 months ago

    hey!! wow!! I never knew you could write such a good SCARY story!! I love this story you gotta keep writing to this story!! The supense is killing me to know what is going to happen next! I am going to keep reading. =]

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