Not So Fast

by More Than Meets The Eyes

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Finally, Emily realized what was happening. Or rather what was going to stop happening: her life. The man was trying to take her heart. Her eyes widened at the excruciating pain that ripped through her whole body, making it shake. She had never experienced such pain or fear ever in her life.

Dana was now looking at Emily and the man, shock painted onto her face. She was right, thought Emily. The Wonderball is bad. She now regretted ever ignoring the warnings Dana had tried to give her.

“Please,” Emily gasped in horror. “Don’t do this to…” the tearing sensation was almost unbearable now. The man’s wicked smile widened and his eyes narrowed. “Finally,” he smirked. “It’s finally going to happen.”

“No!” Emily shouted, she thought it was her last breath, but then a woman came out from the bathroom. Her face calm and gentle.

The other half of the Wonderball…

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Not So Fast

    Six Feet Under The Stars' Buddy Icon Six Feet Under The Stars

    Posted 5 months ago

    this series is insane. it doesnt even belong to one person anymore…at this point its everyones.

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    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 5 months ago

    Woah, two people as the wonderball? That’s interesting…
    LoA

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    Phil Sporlan's Buddy Icon Phil Sporlan

    Posted 5 months ago

    This is what ficlets is all about. I was thinking of two people in that darn ball. explains the split personality.

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    Dreamer's Buddy Icon Dreamer

    Posted 5 months ago

    Yeah, this is what I was kind of thinking too. Fantastic job.
    LoA

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    .:band baby:.'s Buddy Icon .:band baby:.

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice take off of the series! Very nice job. =)
    LoA

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    Eckhouse's Buddy Icon Eckhouse

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This is a heck of a twist, which I think is awesome. I’m grabbing some popcorn and settling in for the rest of this one.

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very interesting twist with the other half of the wonderball introduced

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    Six Feet Under The Stars' Buddy Icon Six Feet Under The Stars

    Posted 5 months ago

    whoa!!!! this is crazy! its like the whole opposites thing-like god/goddess sort of thing. I love it!!

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    Hunting Beauty's Buddy Icon Hunting Beauty

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i completely agree with everyone else. the twist of the second personality and how the 2 personalities are complete opposites is amazing.

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    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 5 months ago

    Cool twist… gotta love the wonderball

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 5 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Aha, nice job bringing back a theme/idea suggested earlier. Very exciting stuff.

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    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 5 months ago

    great twist.
    also, you might want to separate the 3rd paragraph where emily and the man speak. i got a little confused there…

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    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 5 months ago

    amazing twist! nice job!

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    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 5 months ago

    OMG AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    SOOO CREEPY !
    GREAT TWIST !!! LOVE ITT !!!

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    wytherwings' Buddy Icon wytherwings

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    awesome twist.
    this is crazy
    and amazing

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