From Inside The Wonderball part 2

by Phil Sporlan

Emily is frustrated with the system of communication not sure if Dana is getting everything she is saying. Ed walks over to the window. Emily walks away.

“It can be tricky, you’ll get the hang of it.” Ed smiles at his new friend.

“I hope not! I don’t want to get the hang of anything, I want to get out of here ASAP !” Emily yells

Ed stands in front of the window and begins to communicate with Dana. He says “Don’t leave she’s lying!”

Emily freaks out. “What are you doing?”

Ed again smiles this time less friendly than the times before. “I’ve been in her for around fifty years, when I get visitors I like to hold on to them for at least a few years.”

Emily just stares at the old man, if she had a gun, he’d be dead.

“I’m joking of course, Dana is not the one we want taking this journey, too dangerous for her. We need someone who is one tough enough to handle this and two able to believe two people are trapped in this ball of plastic.”

Emily looks up at Ed “My big brother Chris”

Comments

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  1. From Inside The Wonderball part 2

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nice twist. Teensy edit: “begisn” should be “begins”

  2. From Inside The Wonderball part 2

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 4 months ago

    gah! When I read the ” I like to keep my visitors” i was like RAPE !!! RAPE !!!! CREEPY OLD GUY !!!! lmao the whole time.
    But wouldn’t that be wierd if Dana started reading and suddenlyy…
    RAPE !...RAPE!...RAPE!... Jk!
    LMAO

  3. From Inside The Wonderball part 2

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    LOL sailor emo!!!! XD

  4. From Inside The Wonderball part 2

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    Posted 4 months ago

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    LOL sailor emo! That would be funny.

    Awesome job on this ficlet. You did a great job of painting the picture of what is going on. I can picture the look on Emily’s face when the guy said “I like to keep my visitors for a few years”.

  5. From Inside The Wonderball part 2

    Flute Loop<33's Buddy Icon Flute Loop<33

    Posted 4 months ago

    I can’t believe she’s willing to bring her brother into this…. thats creepy! along with the old guy =]

  6. From Inside The Wonderball part 2

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 4 months ago

    hahaha creepy old guy.
    GO CHRIS !!!

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    Posted 4 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    old guy… dumbledore…
    ok done.
    what now…

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