lovers demise

by PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

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with every strength I lifted the ax
the blows to his body, only love’s tax
his blood became a flood of crimson tide
I stopped when I spied the heart that had lied

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  1. lovers demise

    invisibility_disability's Buddy Icon invisibility_disability

    Posted 2 months ago

    wow. this chain is super duper long. i never meant to start this, hahah.
    we were simply studying poetic devices and i was like, “hey, a couplet!” and WHABAMM ! a whole chain of couplet ficlets!
    this is awesome! thanks to everyone who contributed! now i think i have to do another one… hmm…

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