my lover

by User 9590

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the essence of you lingers deep into my soul
your where like a soft drizzle of rain and I was a wilted flower
you nourished me and brought me back to life
you came into my life in a time when I was crestfallen
a time when I could not love any more
your mirthful soul and courteousness captivated me
our souls came together just as destiny called for it to happen
so you could be the rain a I a radiant flower

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  1. my lover

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    In the 2nd sentence “where” should be were, welted=wilted
    3rd sentence should be “came INTO my life” right?
    And in the last sentense it should be
    “so you could be the rain a I a radiant flower”
    No tbeing mean! I’m just trying to help out =D
    lovely poem! I hope to see more! (Im adding you as a contact by the way).

  2. my lover

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 2 months ago

    Gah sorry! When I said correction in 3rd sentence i meant 4th

  3. my lover

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 2 months ago

    beautiful poem, wondeful imagery and it flows nicely=].

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