sunsets

by Megh

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sunsets
they come and go
its always the same sun
the meories never fade along with the sunset
maybe you’ll watch it with different people
maybe you’ll watch it alone
those same memories come out with the sunset but
they dont fade with it
my sunsets

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  1. sunsets

    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted 3 months ago

    this is quite beautiful!
    One tip, ending punctuation.
    But still Beautiful!

  2. sunsets

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 3 months ago

    i was going to pick out lines here and there that really caught my eye but when i put them together i realized that i had the whole poem right there.. so anyway haha yeah, i really like it. the concepts of memories by a sunset never fading though the sun fades is a new one to me and really makes me think, i love it!=]

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