The love of existence

by cracks in a sidewalk

Love. Who truly can understand what it is, how to define it. Even if it is defined, do we truly want a definition? Or would that just ruin our passion for the mystery? I can tell you, I have found love. Found love in a road that licks poor children’s bare feet with mud. A road, lavishly decorated with run down buildings sporting the graffiti of teenage angst. Men, women, and children all laughing and speaking in a language so far from my own it’s filled with grace and beauty. And in the middle of it all, an old women, with wrinkles that wrap her face with age, sunken in eyes that sparkle with memories of years I have never seen and haunting recollections of the dead. A towel, on her head, saving the last of her graying, thinning hair from the rasping wind. And here, in the middle of it all, she carefully carries a basket full of ragged dirty clothing, like it was the most precious thing in her life. And I watched on with envy because I realized that it was here, in the middle of it all, is where I found love.

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  1. The love of existence

    Krulltar's Buddy Icon Krulltar

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Enjoyable story. I like the way you don’t define love, but I’m not totally convinced it was a love of passion.
    She was clearly older (“memories of years I have never seen “) and not considered highly attractive (“wrinkles that wrap her face” while carrying dirty clothes) makes it hard to follow the romantic love that is implied.
    Possibly defining what the narrator fell in love with, or using other words to define the type of love, like amour, passion, endearment, ect would be my suggestions.

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