Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.

by SKermitgorf

After Ethan Jr enjoyed the Hookah and a few drinks he was feeling relaxed. His sister Melanie was talking, but he wasn’t really listening to a word she said.
He knew she was probably talking about a Louis Vuitton bag or shoes or whatever it was the French designer made.

With each fresh drink he got drunker and louder.

“Mel, didya shee who jusht came in the door?”, Ethan said.

Melanie looked. “Oh, isn’t he McHottie from that law show?,”she said excitedly.

“Thash the guy,” Ethan drooled as McHottie approached.

McHottie, also known as Daniel Danko, took Melanies hand and genlty kissed it.
Melanie blushed and giggled.

Ethan Jr, face flushed with jealousy said, “Hey jerk, keep your McHottie hands off my shister.”

“Back off sissyboy,” McHottie said and shoved Etahn Jr. back into his chair.

Ethan got up in a rage, sucker punched the unsuspecting actor, who fell to the floor, screaming, “He boke by dose.”

“Eeth, lets get outta here, now,” his sister demanded as she dragged him away through the crowd.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 2 months ago

    in all the ficlets I have read, none have made me laugh from begining to end. This was hilarious! Man Ethan is such a lightweight.. Hes slurring after a couple of drinks!? Come on, hes high class he shouldnt be a rookie!

  2. Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.

    Apostrophe 's Buddy Icon Apostrophe

    Posted 2 months ago

    in all the ficlets I have read, none have made me laugh from begining to end. This was hilarious! Man Ethan is such a lightweight.. Hes slurring after a couple of drinks!? Come on, hes high class he shouldnt be a rookie!

  3. Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Skeet, you are a master at dialogue. Maybe, just to make it a little more real it should be “He boke by dose”? Very funny!

  4. Ethan Jr.'s Night Out.

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ty Punk, i shall use that..

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