My Life in Technicolour

by Russell Ruffino

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The image in the mirror changed as I leaned in towards it..

I was looking down at a field, small children were racing across uneven turf, cheered on by parents. From above they all looked the same but I knew I was the one out in front, I always won, except this time. I looked away knowing what was about to happen. The crack of my tibia was louder than the cheers of the spectators.

As I watched I saw the defining moments of my life. I flushed seeing myself kiss my first girl, badly. I smiled as I won my first fight.

I don’t know how long I stood there, peering into the mirror, hardly blinking. My contact lenses began to dry out and scratch my eyes, but that might have been my imagination.

I got disinterested when the events became more recent, I remembered all this stuff quite well, I was almost bored. Then I saw myself stumbling through a club and making my way into a cubicle. I watched myself peer into a small silver square.

I thought about looking away at that point, as it skipped to the next event.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. My Life in Technicolour

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 2 months ago

    Interesting turn of events, will he now be able to see his future as well? I like how you portrayed his childhood memories; very well done.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very trippy, with a slight sense of foreboding for me at the end there. I mean, when else do you see your whole life flash before your eyes? Did you mean to use a lot of run-on sentences? That first paragraph in particular. I could sort of see doing that to get across the speed of it all, but just wondering.

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this a lot, though I have the same question as THX , about the run-on sentences being accidental or not. If you _did_intend them, try putting ellipses in between them or something to help even out the pacing. Otherwise, it feels a bit stunted.

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    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 2 months ago

    I did kind of intend it, but I have got rid of most of them and it’s probably better without them. It was an attempt to get the flashing of the images across but it didn’t really work.

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    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 2 months ago

    Is it just me who gets the first line of the 2nd paragraph looking really weird and running of the page? I hope so, otherwise no one will be able to read it. If it isn’t just me does anyone have any idea why that might be happening? It’s in a different font and everything!

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I see it, too. Did you write this in a Microsoft Word document and then copy and paste it? I’ve done that and this has happened before. Try going into edit mode and retyping it to see if it helps.

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    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I also see it. Had to copy/paste to read the whole thing. Very trippy trip here. Interested to see where this goes as I had the same thoughts as THX about this foreshadowing his death.
    Also, I think your second word should be “image” instead of “imagine.”

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    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    Great concept and yeah I see that strange text as well. Maybe if you retype it it might go away…

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    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Listening to Coldplay on the internet today, I came across their song, “Life in Technicolor.” Did it influence the title to this perchance? ;-)

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    Russell Ruffino's Buddy Icon Russell Ruffino

    Posted 2 months ago

    No it didn’t! I don’t like Coldplay, although I think Chris Martin’s probably quite a nice and funny bloke. I saw a play few years ago called My Life in Theatre (starring Patrick Stewart and Joshua Jackson) and that was the influence.

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