"Can I tell you a story?" Continued!!

by JMSquire

“She had these green, and I mean really really green, eyes and short red hair, she was really a stunning girl and I remember saying something along those lines to John later on in the evening, just complimenting the girl he had fallen for, that sort of thing. I’m getting a bit ahead of myself.

We all met at John’s and than piled into my car, that old gray station wagon I had when you first met me. I was in the front, with Michelle obviously. John and Amanda were in the back. The entire time I’m driving I can feel this girl Amanda’s eyes on my back, seriously creepy.

It only took us maybe 15 minutes to drive from John’s place to the restaurant. Burger King… cheap meal cause we really don’t feel as grown up as we are, ya know? So anyway, we eat and it’s cool but I can see John is getting a little pissed, I’m holding Amanda’s attention away from him but I don’t really know how. I mean, I’m conversational and such but I’m just being myself and nice. But she’s paying way to much attention to me, it was weird.”

Comments

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  1. "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!!

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yikes, he could feel her watching him? Seriously creepy indeed…

  2. "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!!

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Burger King! Man, they have the best fries.
    And yes, this chick is creepy. Plus, since she’s a red head, it means that she is insane.

  3. "Can I tell you a story?" Continued!!

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    Neat how the weird theme keeps coming through, like you’d expect from someone telling a story in retrospect after the exciting conclusion I assume we’re getting to.

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