The Pool

by animeaddict850

So I get into the freezing.. Well it’s not freezing ,but really, really, cold. Especially for me, because I get cold very easily! So i let my self in gently. Actually sctratch that, I practically jumped in, and then I started shivering of (of course). Then I started swimming…. I immediately thought the water is soft today.. I realized what I thought and I said
(underwater mind you) I’m insane! So then, I come up gasping for breath. And, then I think I just thought
” The water is soft today”
I must be out of my mind…
The water had a certain feel to though…
I just “soft” is just what came to mind…..

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Pool

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    With some judicious editing, this could be really very good. I like the matter-of-fact tone throughout – it made me smile.

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