Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

by PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

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  1. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ha ha. Awesome twist man. I loved so many of the descriptions. “The metallic taste of irony,” is probably my favorite.
    Thank you for entering.
    PS, I really hope this isn’t autobiographical. =P

  2. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    No, it’s not autobiographical. Just something that happened this weekend, that made me think how it probably goes in some marriages.

  3. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    JMSquire's Buddy Icon JMSquire

    Posted 2 months ago

    The ending blindsided me completely, made me laugh and I didn’t see it coming at all. Great fight scene descriptions all over.

  4. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Yikes, that ending was definitely a surprise. I did not see it coming in the slightest. Great job!

  5. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow. I didn’t laugh… but it may be a while before my eyes go back to their original shape. ;o Wonderful job!

  6. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    wow I was thinking two guys. Cool twist ending, action packed.

  7. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very well executed twist ending. I was delighted to realize at the end, with a smile, that I didn’t have the twist figured out after all. And great descriptions as well, by the way.

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    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    did you publish a novel called what to wear when meeting a kennedy?, i knew it, you are my exwife, your cruelty reveals everything, i pawned your ring by the way to pay my for my dental work. just teasing unless you are her.

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    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 2 months ago

    WOW . Sounds like something I’d do if I wanted a divorce. I’m violent enough with my friends when they do something stupid(Kitty Pom-Pom knows that) if my husband was that kind of idiot I’d end up doing that.

  10. Ring {John's Unexpected Twist Challenge}

    Ridcully Calvert's Buddy Icon Ridcully Calvert

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Really cool twist. That was most unexpected.

    [still giggling]

    LoA

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