Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

by PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

“509 mission control to Dimples 82, come in Enola Gay!”
“509 mission control this is Dimples 82.”
“Dimples 82 abort mission, repeat, abort mission.”
“negative 509 MC!”
“82 this is an emergency, presidential override, Suzuki has just signed the Potsdam Declaration, repeat abort mission!”
“negative 509 MC, Little Boy has already been delivered.”
“Oh my God!”
“Affirmative, only God can help us now! Over and out.”
“Over and out.”

A flock of a thousand paper-cranes stealthily drifts past the B-29 Superfortess bomber…

“Dimples 82 to 509 mission control, come in mission control!”
“Dimples 82 this is 509 mission control, what is your current status?”
“There has been no detonation, the gadget was a dud, repeat, no detonation!”
“Thank goodness! Return to base. Over and out.”
“Affirmative, returning to base. Over and out.”

10 years later Japan attacks the United States using the designs gleaned from the undetonated atomic bomb, wins and annexes it as the 48th prefecture and forces all Americans to learn Japanese…

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 2 months ago

    So your like saying it was a good thing to drop the bombs..

  2. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Imagine if this had been the outcome. Much as I love Japan (went there for the first time recently), I have to be honest and say I’m glad this wasn’t the outcome, horrific though our actions may have been.

  3. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)'s Buddy Icon PyroPunk 51 (PPP LoA)

    Posted 2 months ago

    I just started with the idea that the bomb did not explode and then tried to image what the Japanese would do with an undetonated bomb.

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    John Perkins' Buddy Icon John Perkins

    Posted 2 months ago

    Dude, I so want to learn Japanese anyway. Now all I need is a time machine…

  5. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    i like japan it is a beautiful culture, i as you might know am a cowboy and i have written papers on the independant evolution of the cowboy’s code of chivalry and the way of the samurai, it is suprisingly similar, especially the parts dealing with the showing of emotion and public appearence (or clan honor) One could even compare the lincoln county war to the fall of tokagowa shogunate. So i say hadjema to the idea of being absorbed into japanese culture in THX ’s alternate dimension. LOA

  6. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Mistress Elsha Hawk's Buddy Icon Mistress Elsha Hawk

    Posted 2 months ago

    Interesting train of thought… I think they would dismantle it and build their own.

    Maybe even make it SMALLER !! Ha Ha! ‘Cuz the newer versions of things from japan are always smaller….heh…okay, it wasn’t that funny.

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    JMSquire's Buddy Icon JMSquire

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    @Trifalmadorian_gameshowhost: Ha Ha, yeah well, when a cowboy dishonored his boss he didn’t have to commit suicide.
    @PyroPunk: Awesome alternate take on a historical event. Although the 10 years later seems like an awful long time to wait.

  8. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Six Feet Under The Stars' Buddy Icon Six Feet Under The Stars

    Posted 2 months ago

    whoa…this was totally an awesome idea. and once again, one i never would have thought of, but really cool. lol. i didnt get what was happening till the end, but then i loved it. thanks for entering!

  9. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 2 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Actually a fair portrait of the fears at the time that for many in power justified taking such a drastic action to put an end to the conflict. Um, but when (@trifalmadorian) did this become my alternate reality?

  10. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    @mistress elsha but often times because of honor cowboys have done things they knew would lead to their own demise because it was what needed to be done(sepaku the tennesse volunteers at the alamo same difference)
    @Thx i was just suspending my disbelief lol

  11. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Mighty-Joe Young's Buddy Icon Mighty-Joe Young

    Posted 2 months ago

    oh i get it sorry dont know why i said thx i meant pyro i been up too late.

  12. Enola Gay {Twisted History Challenge}

    Jenunique's Buddy Icon Jenunique

    Posted 2 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great ficlet of how hasty actions can lead to disaster.
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    However, I like my US just the way it is. Constant head butting, trash talking, “someone’s trying to take away my rights” and all.

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