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Remembering Being Tired

by Dreamer

I stopped what I was doing for a moment, watching him. He was examining my rubix cube curiously. I’d messed with it so that each side had an X in one color, the other four spaces another.
“I got bored one day,” I explained, “That design’s really easy to do from a finished one. You twist the middle rows twice in each dimension.”
He stared at me blankly. I grinned, “I’ll show you later.”
He shrugged and put it down, watching me begin to peal the potatoes. “Need help?” he asked cautiously.
“Um, I don’t think so. A little birdie told me you weren’t good at cooking,” I said warily, watching his reaction in my periferal vision.
He scowled, “You talk to my mom too much.”
I grinned, relieved, “Maybe.”
He stared at me for a moment. “You look tired,” he said suddenly.
I shrugged, “Didn’t sleep well.That test freaked me out. I worry too much,” I added, grinning.
He frowned, “No. I didn’t mean right now. I meant in general.”
I clenched my hand tighter around the knife, working to keep my voice aloof, “Do I?”

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Remembering Being Tired

    Dr. Mousse's Buddy Icon Dr. Mousse

    Posted 5 months ago

    Will we finally figure out what is going on with Paige? Please, please, please!
    LoA

  2. Remembering Being Tired

    thebetweenspace's Buddy Icon thebetweenspace

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    One correction: should read so that each side had an X not and X. It kind of scares me seeing her clinch the knife like that after his question. How big are her problems?

  3. Remembering Being Tired

    Ana Cristina's Buddy Icon Ana Cristina

    Posted 5 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You’re very good at creating natural dialogue. Great sequel.

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